Sunday, 22 April 2018

Exam Hacks: Paper 2 Writing


Last year, before the exams I wrote some ‘hacks’ for students. Short little mini lessons or tips to help them get better at answering the question. They often were stylistic choices rather than big ideas guiding how to answer the question. Click here to see my ‘Poetry Hacks’. Click here to see my ‘AQA Paper 1 Reading Hacks’.   

Anyway, here are my hacks for AQA’s GCSE Language Paper 2.  


[1] Start in an interesting way:

Imagine ….

What if…

What does _______ and __________  have in common?

A famous woman said….

The word ‘____’ means ….


[2] Talk to the reader

My friend, I know that…

As you know,…

You know….

Picture this…

Act now and …

Save yourself…


[3]Build a relationship with the reader. Flatter and creep up to them.

My loyal, kind reader…

Only smart, intelligent people, like yourself, will see the benefits of this approach.

Obviously, you know…

A person like you has experience of the issue.


[4] Use pronouns to build up that relationship.

We must …

It is our….


[5] Move between ‘I’ to ‘you’ and then ‘We’ within a paragraph

I think …

You expect …

We know …



Or



My concern is

Your worry is

Our duty is


[6] Repetition is better than chucking every technique under the sun in a paragraph. Repeat a word, phrase or sentence to convince the reader.

I have a plan. I have a plan to change the world. A plan to make things better.


[7] Ethos: don’t forget you need to convince the reader why you are the best person why you should be listened to.

As a teenager, I have had first-hand experience of ….

You probably think I know very little of ….., but I assure you I do because…

I may have the body of a weak teenager, but I have the strong heart and complex brain of an adult.


[8] Use a metaphor and an extended metaphor for dramatic impact.

Bad things – plague, disease, cancer, chains,

Good things – medicine, plants, seeds, light, beacon


Homework is a cancer that plagues a child’s life. They can’t move, play or think without the pain of homework affecting their life.

Exercise is a ray of light in dark, dismal world.  



Tip: it is best if you explain your metaphor in a sentence after the metaphor’s use.


[9] Lists are important – especially verbs and adjectives

Pain, anguish and anxiety are the main problems with …

We all think, feel and know the dangers of …


[10] Verbs are incredibly important when writing a piece of a non-fiction and they can often been underused.

Students cry, weep, sob at the idea of completing homework.

Parents endure the pain of homework too.


[11] Adjectives are your secret to improving your vocabulary. Show off and learn some sophisticated adjectives.

We all want to live in a harmonious society, yet we live in a distorted and disjointed world of discord and chaos.



[12] Plan for a change in tone and mood during your writing. Make your reader cry, laugh and be scared in one piece of writing. Take them on an emotional journey.

Fear -   Children are having their childhood eroded away.

Sarcasm – Most homework is as exciting as reading the Worthington bus timetable.

Serious – We must address this now or will be facing one of the biggest problems today.


[13] Use indirect speech from others to strengthen your arguments. Don’t use direct speech – direct quotes from sources. It weakens your writing.

Parents say…

Teachers say…

Scientists say…

Teenagers say…



[14] Think of the order of things in a list. What do you want to place the emphasis on?

Teachers, students, friends and family are all affected by homework.

Homework restricts fun, friendships and freedom.



[15] Raise the level of urgency and importance with modal verbs. Start with ‘could’ / ‘might’ and end with ‘must’ and ‘have to’

We can

You might ...

We should

You will

We must

  

Thanks for reading,

Xris

Twinkl


The kind people at Twinkl have given me a free account on their website and, in return, I said I’d review, occasionally, some of their resources.



This month’s finds are:  



Narrative Revision Loop Cards

We are in the revision period now and it is a rush to get everything covered. I liked this little resource for getting students to revise some key terms in a relatively easy and ‘fun’ activity. Good as a quick revision activity at the start and end of a lesson.


How to write a sonnet like Shakespeare

I liked the format of this resource and how it can be easily used. It gets students to see the structure of a sonnet and gets them to replicate the structure in their own writing. A nice little worksheet.


Gothic Writing Stimulus

There are a wealth of stimuli for writing on the website, but these ones piqued my interest, because of the topic and the story tasks. They’d make great 200 Word Challenges. They follow the GCSE format for creative writing and so I nice way in for KS3 – especially, if you are exploring Gothic fiction.


All resources can be found here:

http://www.twinkl.co.uk?utm_source=learningfrommymistakesenglish.blogspot.co.uk&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=blog_referral_teacher 


Wednesday, 11 April 2018

Power and Conflict Website Links

One of the things I am growing conscious of is the fact that there are a lot of demands for parents, when it comes to revision. Not every parent, or student, can afford to shower students with glossy revision guides and embellish them with a tutor. I am also conscious of the fact that schools cannot photocopy everything so a students doesn't miss out. With that in mind, I have been thinking of a solution.

There has never been a better time for students with the Internet and YouTube. The major issue is volume. I can't cope with 400 TV station and Netflix when selecting a TV show to watch, so how can students narrow down the focus and select what is right. Therefore, I am going to email parents and students this list next week and advise them that they will be a good starting point when revising the poems. 

The key thing is reading. I want students to read and make notes. I am not a big fan of the English teacher talks through their interpretation of a poem - sorry, not my kind of thing. I'd rather student read through text, sifted for ideas, make notes, rather than listen Dave talk about how he found a line really interesting. Plus, I want student to copy the writing and expression. Dave's monotonous intonation of ideas might be easy to mimic, but it will not be something students will imitate in their writing. Plus, no matter how many times you say 'Grade 9 Analysis' it will not guarantee a Grade 9 and in some cases it offers false hope. 

So, I have included a list. I'd like suggestions of additions and help to read through these ones I have included already. Ideally, this list will be used next year and the year after. 

If you have any suggestions, please a comment below. Dave - we are not including any YouTube videos. 

Thanks, 

Xris 


P.S. Disclaimer - I don't take any responsibility for content on the websites or the accuracy of ideas. 

Ozymandias 








Top Set







London









Top Set




Extract from The Prelude









Top Set




My Last Duchess






Charge of the Light Brigade







Top Set




Exposure







Top Set




Storm on the Island







Bayonet Charge




Top Set




Remains








Poppies










War Photographer







Tissue









The Emigree





Checking Out My History



  

Kamikaze



Sunday, 8 April 2018

We need to talk about Brian’s work!


Ok, I have been using the ‘200 Word Challenge’ for over two years now and in that time I have seen a lot of writing. And, I mean a lot. On average, I look at about forty five pieces a week. Roughly, fifteen pieces a class at KS3. And, in that time I have spotted trends, patterns and interesting things with writing and how students write as I am constantly looking at the writing. I am not doing a termly plough through books, but instead I am measuring the temperature of their writing. Too cold. Too hot. This piece of writing is just right.

Recently, I was working with a student called ‘Brian’. I use that name specifically to hide his identity; I have never taught a Brian. Brian is interesting with his writing, because he is a student who works hard. Brian listens and behaves well in lessons. However, there is a problem with Brian’s work. His writing. He uses paragraphs, punctuation and vocabulary with some proficiency. However, he tends to produce ‘beige’ pieces of writing. They have some value and the content is appropriate, but they often lack variety, interest and enthusiasm. They are just such bland pieces of working. Therefore, they are ‘beige’.

You see Brian isn’t alone in this. And, I think that Brian represents a lot of boys and possibly a lot of girls. I was a Brian at school. I did what Brian did. I ‘phoned-in’ a performance with my work. If there was one thing I can do well, it is to write meaningless waffle. I could do it for hours. Give me a question and I could write ten pages on crop rotation or the benefits of pesticides. You see that ‘phoned-in’ writing doesn’t engage the full brain and so I was able to be in a ‘semi-state of working’. I was neither working really hard nor doing nothing. I was in a trance state. I suppose the nearest thing I can link it to is the state of mind you have when completing a colouring book or reading Facebook comments. You are active and doing the process, but you heart, mind and soul are not fully engaged.

In fact, I’d say that a lot of my education was spent in this trance state. You do just enough to keep the teacher off your back, but not enough to progress further. It was a great place to be, if I was honest. It was a safe place to be. I didn’t get the attention from the teacher for being great at a task (I never thought for a second I’d get that) and the negative attention for not completing the work. So for years I produced drivel and boy did I produce pages of drivel. In fact, I produced so much drivel that I’d rarely be picked up for my lack of work in a lesson. I’d write and write. I’d write with half a brain on the task and the other half on thinking about what I’d have for tea. I’d do this for every subject and every task.

The ‘200 Word Challenge’ has made me see this phenomenon up close. You see Brian turns up the quality of work for final assessments, but by then it is too late. The day-to-day work is phoned in. Brian switches on the automatic pilot and feels comfortable and safe with his work. When you do it so much, it becomes a normal process of working. And, a hard process to break, especially when, physically, Brian is doing nothing wrong. He writes enough and he completes the task set. He is completing the task and the teacher has nothing to complain about. It is a safe place for the student and a safe place for the teacher.    

So, how would I describe this type of writing? Well, I say that it is just average. Average words. Average sentences. Average ideas.  Nothing flashy. Nothing exciting. Nothing impressive.

For an eternity we have had an issue with borderline students. We are constantly feel like we are going to lose our minds over these borderline students. Could there be something in our eyes that’s making such fools pushing us over the borderline? Could it be the fact that these student have adopted this way of working? It isn’t malicious. It isn’t really lazy. It is just safe. A safe place to be. A place to hide. Not every child wants positive or negative attention. They just want to get on through the lesson or day with the least amount of resistance and resilience. Yes, they will add a word to their writing, because the teacher instructed them to. Yes, they will add a simile to their writing, because the teacher instructed them to. No, they will not change the way they write, because it will cause attention and doesn’t feel comfortable.

Boys are often tarnished as being lazy. I’d argue they are not. I’d argue that they often find, like everybody, a formula that works and stick with it and repeat it. From what I have seen over two years is this pattern. Boys writing being appropriate to the task and being neither really good nor really bad. They have been somewhere in the middle. Average. Beige. Bland. Phoned in.

In the classroom, we need to speak about this ‘phoned in’ performance. You see I think boys (and some girls) are not aware of what they are doing. It is a fixed pattern of behaviour that they can’t see, because they are doing nothing wrong. I think we need to talk to the students. We need to talk about it and highlight it and put a spotlight on it. You see extra lessons, extra interventions or a different strategy will not change this child. The behaviour needs to change and not the teaching.

Brian, we need to talk about your writing.



Thanks for reading,



Xris

Sunday, 11 March 2018

Isn’t ‘An Inspector Calls’ so pretty?


We are in the eye of the exam preparation storm and we are looking, as a department, at how we can help our students with the exams. A recent mock showed us how students struggled with A02 when exploring ‘An Inspector Calls’. And, I’d have to agree it is hard, and, I have read modern drama at university. Prose and Shakespeare can be relatively easy when exploring language choices because they are reliant on rich language and description to paint a picture of a character, situation or event. Shakespeare didn’t have the painted backdrops, or enough actors or props to convey an army or a boat at sea. Dickens told his story over months so he needed people to remember what characters looked like so they could remember them many months later. A playwright and especially a modern playwright have very little dialogue and speeches to convey complex emotions, because they are traipsing the thin line between realism and story-telling. A playwright is focused on relationships and the subtle behaviour patterns of people. The relationships and behaviour is subtle and so too must the language of a play be subtle.

Students will probably skip around plot with ‘An Inspector Calls’ more than any of the other texts. The characters are closer to being real people for them. They act and behave like real people. It is hard for them to separate the person from the character. The problem with ‘An Inspector Calls’ is it is hard to break the ‘suspension of disbelief’ and it is real. Yes, we know Gerald does that, but how does he use language to show it. 

I’d argue that we have to be even more explicit with the choices a playwright makes. We have to be visual with these choices - something, I have alluded to before. Students can pick up subtle nuances from everyday speech, but it needs to be more explicit when reading the play. Tone is useful. However, tone can easily lead to plot level idea.

The Inspector uses an aggressive tone to show he is determined to get to the truth.

The playwright gives the Inspector an aggressive tone here so that the character shows their determination to get to the truth.

Yes, I could add another sentence and add ‘symbolises’ to extend the level of explanation, but it doesn’t really convince me that the student understands the text fully. Students can easily recall the tone as again it is something that real people do. That’s why I am working hard on drawing attention to the choices made by the writer. The students might think the events of ‘An Inspector Calls’ is like real life, but I am going to work harder to show the artifice.

Take these specific choices:

·         Inspector describes Eva Smith as ‘not pretty’ after the death but alive she had been ‘very pretty’

·         Eric describes her as ‘pretty’ and a ‘good sport’

·         Sheila is described as being ‘pretty’ in stage notes  

·         Gerald is described as ‘attractive’ in the stage notes

·         Gerald refers to Eva Smith (Daisy Renton) as ‘pretty’- ‘soft brown hair and big dark eyes’ 



I’ve not really given much thought to how pretty characters are in ‘An Inspector Calls’. I don’t read a play and go, ‘Phwoar, look at that Lady Macbeth!’. Nor, do I rate the characters on who I’d snog, marry and avoid in ‘Pride and Prejudice’.  You don’t really. However, there is a running thread of how attractive Eva Smith in the play and it is repeated. But, why does Priestley use the word ‘pretty’ several times in the play.

·         Make a connection between Sheila and Eva so she identifies with her more

·         To show that poor and rich are alike physically

·         To show us that physical looks are not enough to sustain a person in society

·         To show us how the poor are only noticeable when they ‘pretty’

·         To show how ‘like attracts like’ – ‘attractive’ Gerald went for ‘pretty’ Daisy Renton

·         To show us how Eva is better than your average poor person – she is an innocent – Eric describes the rest of the women as ‘fat old tarts’.  

·         To romanticise the poor

·         To challenge the notion that the poor are dirty, disgusting, unhealthy and unattractive

·         To visually represent what the rich have done to the poor – they make her ugly – ‘not pretty’

·         To reflect the journey she travels – pretty to ugly – all cause by men and women

·         To show the audience that the poor are deserving.

·         To show personality – a pretty person is a good person and an ugly person shows an ugly personality  - What about Gerald?

·         To highlight how she is a victim – Victorian melodrama – perils of Pauline

·         To make the audience care for her

I could go on and on. That’s even before I start looking at how ugly characters are. Those five explicit choices help step up a discussion of the role that Eva Smith holds in the text. When students read the play, they just get the idea that she is ‘fit’ and everybody wants a bit of ‘hanky-panky’ with her. There’s something more and more interesting than her being a bit pretty. Priestley does what Dickens does – he romanticises the poor. In a sense, both Dickens and Priestley are guilty of the same thing: they ‘poor wash’ texts. We don’t get realistic characters; instead we get ciphers who idolise the poor.    

Right, I am off to plan my starter for tomorrow’s lesson.

Who do you fancy most?

Belle                      Mrs Cratchit                       Mrs Birling           Eva Smith            My Last Duchess

Only joking. That’s an essay instead. Anyway, I have attached the text I am using for students to see the explicit choices made by Priestley. We are going to turn it into an A5 booklet and get students to highlight choices linked to a theme. They have to think about why that choice has been made by the playwright. Feel free to use *.

Thanks for reading,

Xris



*If I see this resource copied on TES or another site without my permission, I will get my specially trained piranhas to eat you. And, they don’t care if you are pretty or ugly.   

Staging  – A02 Choices

·         First line in the play is directed to Edna ‘ Giving us the port, Edna’

·         We see no other part of the house

·         The 7 characters in the story – four male / three female

·         Audience never sees or hears of Eva Smith – audience are not aware of what she looks like – only know her through the characters telling their stories which link to her  

·         Starts with an engagement party

·         Set solely in the dining room

·         Set in real time

·         Set in 1912 – historic setting for the audience – recent past – before the war

·         House of a prosperous manufacturer

·         Three act play

·         Every act ends on a cliff-hanger 

·         Order of the interrogation – Mr Birling – Sheila – Gerald - Mrs Birling – Eric

·         Eva Smith’s story is revealed to us in chronological order – there are two narratives in the story – the events of Eva Smith’s life and the events of that night. However, technically, Eric met Eva before Mrs Birling so it should be him before Mrs Birling

·         The last word in the play is ‘questions’





Act 1

·         All the characters are happy in the stage directions – ‘smiling’, ‘gaily’, ‘half playful’, ‘suddenly guffaws’

·          The women leave the men to talk after the main celebrations – Eric, Mr Birling and Gerald are all left on stage when the Inspector is announced

·         ‘Sharp ring’ of the doorbell announces the Inspector’s arrival during Mr Birling’s line – ‘a man has to look after himself and his own’   

·         When the Inspector arrives the men act light-heartedly – ‘humorously’, ‘lightly’. Eric doesn’t behave in the same way – ‘uneasy, sharply’ 

·         The levels of aggression increase with Mr Birling, Eric and the Inspector during their conversation (‘rather angrily’ / ‘sulkily’). Sheila’s entrance deflates that with her ‘gaily’ comment

·         The Inspector changes the way he describes the death of Eva Smith between the men and the women – ‘Burnt her insides out’ /‘a young woman drank some disinfectant and died, after several hours of agony’

·         Mr Birling leaves the stage after it has been discovered that Sheila has a connection with the dead girl – ‘I must have a word with my wife’

·         Eric and the Inspector leave to fetch Mr Birling

·         End of Act 1 contains two characters alone on stage – Gerald and Sheila – then the Inspector arrives

·         Act 1 starts and end with a different point in the relationship between Gerald and Sheila





Act 2

·         The Inspector fools us into thinking he will interrogate Mrs Birling before Gerald, but then questions Gerald

·         The Inspector repeats the fact that Eva Smith was ‘pretty’

·         Gerald thinks that Sheila should leave as she has had ‘as much as she can stand’

·         The stage directions between Act 1 and Act 2 change considerably. In Act 1, characters tended to be ‘angrily’ or ‘distressed’. In Act 2, characters are ‘cutting in’, ‘sharply’, ‘ coolly’, ‘bitterly’, etc.

·         Sheila uses the pronoun ‘we’ to apportion blame – ‘And probably between us we killed her’

·         Idea of her diary is introduced at the middle of Act 2

·         Sheila returns the ring to Gerald after listening to the story about the affair 

·         When Mrs Birling is being interrogated, the scene is interrupted several times by the search for Eric

·         The characters tend to get more emotional towards the end of the scene – ‘distressed’, ‘terrified’, ‘sternly’, ‘thunderstruck’

·         Act 2 ends with the arrival of Eric and the discovery of his link to Eva Smith



Act 3

·         No time has passed between Act 2 and Act 3

·         The majority of Eric’s confession is with male characters only

·         Eric was absent from Mrs Birling story so we have the story told to Eric again in reduced form

·         The Inspector recaps the whole narrative of Eva Smith’s journey before he leaves

·         As the Inspector leaves, the characters are physically changed. Sheila –crying / Mrs Birling –collapsed / Eric –brooding / Mr Birling – active, moving about

·         The characters attack each other. Mr and Mrs Birling attack Eric and Sheila responds.

·         The structure of Act 3 is an inversion of Act 1 – both involve the Inspector leaving or arriving towards the middle – a dramatic shift

·         Sheila once again repeats the narrative of Eva Smith’s life – copying the Inspector

·         Both Act 1 and Act 3 involve the doorbell ringing  to change the events – Gerald returns in Act 3 – second time is more dramatic based on previous events 

·         The characters after being investigated by the Inspector now investigate the Inspector

·         The characters get more and more angry and aggressively towards each other – ‘protesting,’ shouting’, ‘shouting, threatening’, ‘ bursting out’, ‘flaring up’

·         After having Eva Smith’ story repeated a few times, we how have Gerald retelling the story but trying to disconnect the parts each person played

·         The use of the photograph is questioned

·         The characters group themselves off – Gerald, Mr Birling and Mrs Birling side together and Sheila and Eric side together

·         Use of telephone call to establish the truth

·         Birling’s last speech repeats the Inspector’s description of Eva Smith’s death, but removes all traces of emotion.





Characters – A02



Birling

·         Mr Birling has an accent – ‘provincial in his speech’

·         Mr Birling is pompous  – ‘portentous’

·         Birling gives long speeches

·         Mr Birling constantly like to refer to his famous connections – Chief Constable , Colonel Roberts (golf)

·         Mr Birling makes reference to Titanic being unsinkable and a war with the Germans never happening

·         Mr Birling insists on telling the Inspector of his daughter’s engagement to the son of Sir George Croft

·         Mr Birling takes his frustration of the Inspector out on Eric – ‘Look-just keep out of this’

·         Mr Birling is shocked when Sheila is too candid – ‘only escaped with a torn blouse’

·         Mr Birling protects Sheila from the Inspector because she is ‘a young unmarried girl’

·         Mr Birling refers to himself as a ‘public man’ and not a private man and he worries later about the ‘Press’

·         Mr Birling orders Sheila to remove Mrs Birling when she hears Eric’s story

·         Mr Birling has so much money that he did not realise that Eric stole money from him

·         Eric calls him as ‘not the kind of father a chap could go to when he’s in trouble’ 

·         Mr Birling’s main concern when the Inspector leaves is the ‘scandal’ it will cause and its impact on his ‘knighthood’ – returns to the start

·         Mr Birling at the end attempts to silence Sheila and control Eric – ‘If you’ve nothing more sensible than that to say, Sheila, you’d better be quiet’  - ‘Eric, sit down’

·         Mr Birling is described mocking the Inspector at the end of Act 3 before the truth is discovered – ‘Imitating INSPECTOR in his final speech’

·         Mr Birling describes his children as ‘hysterical’ at the end of the play and that they ‘cannot take a joke’



Gerald

·         Gerald is described as ‘attractive’ in the stage notes

·         Gerald always agree with Mr Birling at the start of the play

·         Gerald picked the ring for the engagement – is it the one you wanted me to have?

·         Gerald’s connection to Eva Smith is discovered in a different way – he recognises the name rather than have the Inspector point out the connection

·         Gerald uses the euphemism ‘women of the night’ to describe prostitutes in the Palace Variety Theatre yet is quite negative about them - ‘hard-eyes dough-faced women’

·         Gerald refers to Eva Smith (Daisy Renton) as ‘pretty’- ‘soft brown hair and big dark eyes’  

·         Gerald starts calling Eva a ‘girl’ then uses her name when in the story his relationship is closer

·         Gerald uses the euphemism ‘make love’ when denying he intend to support Eva Smith for sexual gratification

·         Gerald asserts to others that the affair wasn’t ‘disgusting’

·         Gerald offers the ring again to Sheila at the end of the play



Sheila

·         Described as being ‘pretty’ in stage notes  

·         Sheila uses slang at the start of the play ‘squiffy’ and refers to her mother as ‘mummy’. This changes as events get serious.

·         Sheila and Eric are the only characters who ask questions to find out more about Eva Smith when they first hear about the suicide

·         Sheila gives an emotional response when she views the photograph – ‘half-stifled sob, and then runs out’, ‘almost breaks down’ and changes emotionally to ‘miserably’ and ‘distressed’

·         Sheila is the only character to visibly cried as a result of events – ‘Enter Sheila, who looks as if she’s been crying

·          Sheila refuses to leave when her connection to Eva Smith is revealed and the Inspector confirms he is finished with her

·         Sheila is the only character to not know Eva Smith by a name before the events of the play

·         During Act 2 Sheila starts to argue, challenge and laugh at her parents – who don’t like it

·         Sheila reverts to sarcasm when Gerald is telling the Inspector his story

·         Sheila refer to Gerald as the ‘hero’  and ‘the wonderful Fairy Prince’ of his story

·         Sheila refers to herself as ‘not a child’

·         Sheila ‘respects’ rather than hates Gerald after the affair 

·         Sheila was influenced by a woman to go to the Palace Bar – ‘There was some woman who wanted her to go there’

·         Sheila is drunk when she meets Eric – who is also unsurprisingly drunk too

·         Sheila refers to her parents as being ‘childish’ for not facing up to the facts and their role in Eva Smith’s fate

·         Sheila tries to leave the room at the end of the play – ‘ I want to get out of this. It frightens me the way you talk’

·         Sheila repeats twice that the way her parents ‘talk’ scares her

·          



Eric

·         Eric helps himself to a drink in Act 1

·         Eric and Sheila are the only characters to use slang

·         Eric is the one character that interrupts and questions Mr Birling during his big speech in Act 1

·         Eric refuses to go to bed when instructed by his father because of the Inspector – yet he doesn’t stay in the room

·         By Eva Smith he is described as ‘ a youngster – silly and wild’

·         Eric is more forthcoming than the other characters with his connection – ‘You know, don’t you?’

·         Eric still acts childish at the end – accusing his sister of being a sneak for telling his parents about his drinking

·         When explaining his story, Eric has another drink

·         Eric doesn’t really use euphemistic terms to describe his sexual relationship with Eva. He simply describes it as ‘it’

·         Eric couldn’t remember Eva Smiths name after their first encounter

·         Eric doesn’t think he stole the money because he ‘intended to pay it back’

·         Asserts his maturity – ‘I’m old enough to be married’

·         Eric links his behaviour to his father’s friend’s behaviour – ‘fat old tarts…. I see some of your respectable friends with’

·         Eva Smith treated him like a ‘kid’ in relation to the pregnancy

·         Mr Birling refers to Eric as ‘spoilt’

·         One discovering his mother’s actions, Eric’s thoughts are broken down with dashes and pointed use of pronouns – you, her, she, you, me, you, her, you, her, she,  my, your, you, you, you   

·         Eric, after discovering that the Inspector isn’t real, is still affected – ‘I say the girl’s dead and we all helped to kill her’ 

·         After spending the majority of the play being vague and distant, Eric spends the last act being blunt, direct and honest – ‘we all helped to kill her’

·         Eric agrees with his sister at the end of the play 

Mrs Birling

·         Mrs Birling greets the Inspector ‘smiling’ even though her husband has told her the reason for his visit 

·         Mrs Birling refers to Eva Smith and the suicide as ‘a girl of that class’ 

·         Mrs Birling calls her son a ‘boy’ and not a ‘man’. She refers to Gerald as a ‘man’ and Eric as a ‘silly boy’ later in the play.

·         Mrs Birling is shocked to discover someone she thought as a good man is a ‘womaniser’ – Aldermand Meggarty – but according to Sheila ‘everyone knows’ 

·         Mrs Birling constantly tries to shut the conversation down – ‘I think we’ve just about to an end of this wretched business’

·         Mrs Birling is the one character that lies about her connection – the other characters avoid talking or misdirect the audience: ‘You’re not telling the truth’.

·         The Inspector describes the organisation Mrs Birling works at as an organisation helping ‘women in distress’ – Mrs Birling does not describe its purpose

·         Mrs Birling was the ‘prominent member’  / ‘chair’ of the organisation

·         Mrs Birling’s dislike of Eva Smith stems from her use of their name – ‘impertinently made use of our name’ 

·         Mrs Birling refer to the Inspector having ‘no power’ over her and even blames her husband for Eva Smith’s situation rather than take any responsibility

·          Describes the father of Eva Smith as not being of her ‘class’

·         Mrs Birling doesn’t explain what she did to Eva Smith to Eric

Inspector

·         Inspector is roughly the same age as Mr Birling

·         Inspector controls the flow of information by only showing the photograph to one character at a time  - he also stand in front of characters to block their view

·         Inspector makes a clear point of starting his investigation by clearly stating that it is a ‘Suicide, of course’ and there is no reference to murder

·         Inspector is quite direct and emotionless at times. Repeats ‘of course’ twice when introducing the death of Eva Smith

·         Inspector tends to speak ‘dryly’ and ‘steadily’ occasionally suggesting a level of detachment or subtle address to the audience

·         He speaks to Sheila ‘harshly’ and ‘sternly’ - Act 1

·         Inspector is inflexible and has a plan – ‘he must wait his turn’

·         Inspector uses the word ‘mistress’ when describing Gerald’s link to Eva Smith

·         Depending on the person, depends how vivid his description of the death is. To Mrs Birling, he describes ‘she lies with a burnt-out inside on a slab’ 

·         When referring to the sexual relations between Eric and Eva Smith he refers to it as pretty ‘make love’

·         After the last revelation, the Inspector’s speeches get lengthier

·         His last speech places him in the same position of them – us, our, we, we, we, we. Then, he distances things by stating ‘I tell’ and refer to people as ‘men’ 

·         Then, the last speech he ends by saying ‘Good Night’ and no discussion of the procedure related to the case

·         Sheila describes him as ‘never seemed like an ordinary police inspector – others late describe him as being ‘frightening’ (Sheila), ‘peculiar’, ‘suspicious’  (Birling), ‘rude, extraordinary’ (Mrs Birling) 

·         Birling describes him as possibly being a ‘socialist’ or ‘crank’ – showing he seems they are both the same thing



Edna

·         Has the least amount of speech in the play

·         Only responds to orders

·         No opinions

·         Refers to characters as ‘sir’ and ‘ma’am’ 

·         Has no surname





Eva Smith

·         Not seen on stage at all

·         Inspector describes her as ‘not pretty’ after the death but alive she had been ‘very pretty’

·         Twenty-four when she died

·         Each character knows her by a different name or identity – Sheila is the only character to not know her by a specific name 

·         Told Gerald when he left her that she was ‘the happiest she has ever been’ with him

·         Eva Smith only lies at the end with Mrs Birling and not before

·         Eric describes her as ‘pretty’ and a ‘good sport’

·         Didn’t want Eric ‘to marry her’

·         The Inspector links Eva Smith to John Smith a common name in British culture – meaning a common, ordinary person – an everyman